Nice animation! The art / animation is a little rough around the edges at times, but the overall camera angles, sense of action, and movement are very good. Work on the contrast of text / titles - for instance, add a black slightly transparent background behind the subtitles, and it would look much better / make the text pop more. You could even add a simple button to show / hide the subtitles, which would be a nice touch.

Also, great use of my song "Shifting Sands". I pictured a desert when I made it, and it was really cool to see it used in exactly that way. Keep up the good work, you'll only get better as you go :)

Wow, this was really cool and I like the fact how you used adventure quest styled characters and backgrounds! 5/5 Mario's Golden Stars!

Not bad. The animation was a little rough around the edges, but the action was pretty easy to follow. The voice acting was solid. Certainly good enough to move the plot, but a little more expression should be worked toward. I will say that the ending felt a bit abrupt before the credits ran.

All in all though, not bad especially considering the length. Certainly room for improvement, but a solid effort overall.

Good work on part 2. I will be looking forward to the rest of the series.