LH : The Last Rage eps 2

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After dragonlord sealed 2 VenomLord, the news about it circulate throughout the kingdom around the world. Fidia the Desader go into the desert and try to find the clue about another blackdragon rage fragment, to exact his revenge into someone. Her hatred is growing...
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Nice animation! The art / animation is a little rough around the edges at times, but the overall camera angles, sense of action, and movement are very good. Work on the contrast of text / titles - for instance, add a black slightly transparent background behind the subtitles, and it would look much better / make the text pop more. You could even add a simple button to show / hide the subtitles, which would be a nice touch.

Also, great use of my song "Shifting Sands". I pictured a desert when I made it, and it was really cool to see it used in exactly that way. Keep up the good work, you'll only get better as you go :)

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crs05 responds:

Woooah thanks a lot. Now i'm working on episode 3, maybe i will use your song again and really? you made it to pictured a desert?

Wow, this was really cool and I like the fact how you used adventure quest styled characters and backgrounds! 5/5 Mario's Golden Stars!

Not bad. The animation was a little rough around the edges, but the action was pretty easy to follow. The voice acting was solid. Certainly good enough to move the plot, but a little more expression should be worked toward. I will say that the ending felt a bit abrupt before the credits ran.

All in all though, not bad especially considering the length. Certainly room for improvement, but a solid effort overall.

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crs05 responds:

ok, thanks a lot for your comment, I will make this better ib episode 3, and I will fix the problem in the opening tomorrow

Good work on part 2. I will be looking forward to the rest of the series.

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3.06 / 5.00

Jan 27, 2014
10:37 PM EST