Wow, I loved how you tied up stuff from the previous episode into this one, and all the time stuff!
I can't wait for the next episode :) This should be aired on tv
This is pretty good. I think your humor is improving too. keep up the good work
That was quite entertaining. As a side note, if the episode was roughly three minutes longer it could air on North American TV.
I hope you continue with that story line, It's very interesting