Very Good Story and voice acting the only problem was no background art but you set the expectation and I like it.
First animation? Are you kidding me?
This was some A-class animation! Good job on the jokes, the sound effects, the voices. The only thing i think you could've done better is add a bit of colour or some backgrounds?
Maybe you could get a friend so they don't all have the same voice? The guy who dropped the coin, why is his head twisted 180° for the first half? Is he an owl? It's great that you animated mouth movements, what about the rest of the facial features? 1/1 for mouth animation. Keep working at it. Please note this isn't a 1 star because it's terrible, it's a 1 star in comparison to everything on newgrounds. Without new animators, newgrounds withers and dies, so please keep at it. One day I hope to review your work with 5 stars.