Gave me a good first impression.
Well, it's true. NG viewers like to see something more lengthy than 10-20secs of something, but I doubt a lot of them would like to see a 15min flash on this sort of low-quality work. I don't know if it's one of your first flash movies, but if it is, I give you credit for a valient effort. If it's one of your more recent ones, please...learn how to make the movie flow better.