You got the animation part down, but it needs better story devolopment and better pacing within that as well
well that was dramatic. It was a well done animation indeed. You could add some lip movement and the voice acting can have some improvements. I really did like how you kept things a bit random. I don't see a problem in anything else. good job!
that was, flash? a rather weird one at that. not a bad job though, could use work
the characters and backgrounds were done in illustrator. Thanks for the feedback