Art was decent I guess, but doesn't really convey a point of any kind. If that's what you were going for then I hate to say it, but your audience is extremely limited. Even animators who have an art style that leave you saying "what did I just watch" have some sort of deeper meaning integrated into their work.
Keep up the work, man. Just wasn't my cup of tea.
Hmm... the idea seems interesting, but I am not sure things were well thought out from an execution standpoint. Much of it came off as rushed, and it was difficult to figure out what exactly was going on at the end.
Also, the recording quality was pretty low. It was hard to hear, and it had a very 'echo-ey' feel to it. It might be a good idea to look into your setup for improving the quality - there are a lot of easy fixes to create solid recordings.
With that said, I think with a little more work, there could be something pretty good. Just needs a little more time and effort...