I've seen some of this type work done before. With this stuff, you need something that stands out, or for it not to be low quality at the very least. There's no real point to having a series if it accomplishes nothing. You need a lot more work if you want to get anywhere. First try at least a little more animation, because I could probably make this whole thing in a day or 2. The story is good either. You should make a few good episodes, even just one, then being here with trash at episode 12.