I can honestly say That's fair. Audio can more then likely be the reason you were unhappy with my work. I was struggling with the audio on rule 3 (I recorded both on the same track but with different volume settings since one of the characters was meant to be far away and the others voice was to high a pitch.) But it really was a mistake since I couldn't change the volume on the announcers voice separately after recording them that way. time constraints aside I couldn't go back to re-render that part of the animation. so it was left in. thank you for your feedback, I admit I do try much harder on my animating then I do on my voice work but overall I really should have better equipment for voice work. sorry if that's not a good enough explanation :(

The animation was trying to tone it down from what I usually do. its supposed to be more jolly then anything. a warm feeling with maybe a chuckle here and there. so once again the feedback is appreciated. hope I hear more from you in the future :D