I feel like you can expand a bit more on this. It's great overall and even made me laugh alittle. I get a sense that you are a starting animator on this site, if so, keep up the good work. some things you might want to look into improving are: frame rate, audio, and art. Vague, I know, but I don't think i should go into too much detail with my criticism since it would be wasted if you didn't improve.
keep making videos and I look forward to your work