Overall it's pretty rough but the concept is good. The timing needs to be worked on as well as the voice acting. Like Nick2292 said, I could hardly understand what was being said, and probably wouldn't have understood what was going on if it weren't for the captions on some parts. The animations are good too, its not really my kind of art style but the animations were good.
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Poof! finally it's done.It's concept came in my dreams a few years ago, Now I finally made it on flash.I would like to Specially thank Moogiwara-No-Luffy for helping me with the Surge voice and a little bit with the Concept .He is not on Newgrounds ,You can visit him on Facebook Moogiwara-No-Luffy https://www.facebook.com/RisabhBanshkar?fref=ts
.Hope you may enjoy the adventure of fatman :D .Enjoy Newgroundains!!!!!!
hreyas responds:
thank you waspelectra
Funny. Great angles on the Animation.
hreyas responds:
THANKS
Not bad, but not great. Main things i saw, your script could use some work, as well as the voice acting. It was hard to understand some of what the characters were saying. Your animation is pretty good (better than anything I'd be able to do) and i got a couple of laughs out of what you did. So again, not bad, but not great.
hreyas responds:
THANKS FOR YOUR SUGGESTION