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BadLuck Steve

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Steve runs into trouble.
this is my first animation sorry its short but it's just something
simple so could get use to flash! hope you enjoy.
please give me advice or something.

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that...was...AWESOME dude my favorite part was when the diamond burned dude nice work keep it up and you'll be a newground famous

Not bad for your first animation. I play Minecraft as well, so I can understand the hilarity of this short! There are a few improvements that you can make for your next one though.

The animation was a bit choppy/slow. Try adding a higher fps or more motion tweens, which should make the animation flow smoother. Possibly more sounds. Plus you could definitely make the next one longer. Although it was a short, you could always add a little more to improve your flash. Make up for the quality with quantity! Until you improve a little.

But all-in-all it was a good flash, especially for your first flash. Keep it up man, you will only improve! Practice makes perfect.

3/5

~BM~

Haha! I can totally relate to that! My only complaint is that there was no sound, and the animation seemed to be missing a few in-betweens, but apart from that, well done. Even someone with minimal Minecraft knowledge could follow the animation, and you did it without sound as well.

Ejima responds:

There should be sound! and thank you for your advice :P

Good animated keep up the work and maybe someday you will gain some real animation skill (not that its bad, but really? Everyone does minecraft. Make an animation of yourself and try to put a lot of thought into it as well! Remember original and interesting content gets you places.

Not Too Bad, Could Deffinitly Use More, Wasn't A Huge Fan On Cutting Out The Explosion. I Would Have Surerly Found It Amusing If The Creeper Blew Up And Knocked Him Into The Wall, Then He Slides Of Into The Lava. Or Something Like That. Use You're Imagination And It Should Be Good c:

Got A Giggle When I Saw The Creepers Face :3

Ejima responds:

that would of been a good idea! thanks and at least it made you giggle :P

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Score
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Uploaded
Nov 23, 2013
3:29 PM EST