The intro was very slow and can put people off watching it, the music was very overpowering to the very little amount of words said and the animation was pretty poor. The storyline was strange and hardly understandable and incomplete.

I'm not being harsh, these are just things I've spotted and you should work on. I advise making the intro shorter or more interesting, lower the sound of the music and attempt to make it more relevant to the actual animation, then try and add more voices and improve the storyline and animation.

is there even a link between all of the scenes . I dont think so , these random elements dont make sense at all , even the music doesnt suits the mood of the moment

I'm a little confused as to what I just watched. The start was fine, and I was a little intrigued at the name change but then it got confusing after that. I think it needs a little more of an obvious point.

P.S. I know it's an experimental animation, so what I just wrote may not even apply.

What? Was that a whale? Seems cool, but little bit too short.

half a star because you actually made me watch this twice, if there is some deep meaning behind any of that then let me know because there seems to be some real hidden messages in this short random flash.