this isn't worth only 2! it was original and creative. Good stuff.

Your art style... I understand. I draw like that too. ADHD?

I will say that, perhaps you are more of a 3 dimensional artist? I tried drawing for years like everyone else and all I ever came up with was gibberish. But then I found Google Sketch-up and I found that I can make 3-d art really well. Perhaps you have a similar art bend.

OR...

... perhaps you just need to practice, practice, practice... or maybe you just didn't care for this flash and threw together some random lines.

EITHER WAY...

I liked this one. The art style was not something spectacular but, it mixed well with the theme of this flash and the music. I actually liked this one, it was fairly interesting.

buuuh

Work on the animation a bit: nothing a little practice won't fix!

tis not bad flash takes awhile that's for sure so keep it up and keep improving.