This would have been great for Halloween.
HAPPY DAY OF THE DEAD!
This would have been great for Halloween.
The animation is extremely choppy and poorly made. I do understand that this was only meant as a commemoration for a holiday; but understand that i'm only critiquing this based on the actual visual quality of the video, not the premise or content. In that regard, get some more practice with different styles of animation. Art is all about what you can do within limitations.
The white part of the screen showed at times, which was annoying. Please fix that. I like the effort you put into it.
Siento que mi espanol es oxidado, así que escribí en Inglés
lol make your text and button grouped, clean up some of the things, nice idea. just overall take more of an analytic approach to overall production.