Really need to get a better mic, man
Funny, but maybe drawn out a bit long

That's a pretty cool style of storytelling. Could definately do something with that.

The animation got pretty good towards the end. Unfortunately, it took an awfully long time to get to that part. The audio quality was pretty terrible, and this movie sadly lacked… well, it lacked "a good movie idea". But your animation talent definitely shows promise. Keep trying, and you'll get better.