This is ,essentially, a slide show with background music and poorly synced sound effects. What exactly were you trying to accomplish?
The Halberd 2.0 has been launched into the atmosphere! Kirby invades it and finds yoshi, the cuddable dinosaur. Elsewhere, Marth, Roy, and Lucas invade the Large mountain's caves. Where, later, they meet Mario, luigi, Link, and all of them. Next a special someone is found and someone is freed.
This is ,essentially, a slide show with background music and poorly synced sound effects. What exactly were you trying to accomplish?
Draw more, use less power point crap. I bet this looks good on paper but it needs to be more than just a damn slide show because like this it's not doing the plot justice and it hurts me that I have to watch this and not read it.