your animation has some potential, but it could be much better. polish it up, you are on your way to making a decent animation, but it could have been longer and it doesn't really make sense. keep at it.
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I made this in 3 days. It's based off something I drew. So I drew more stuff and put into a cartoon. You are now watching that cartoon.
made me chuckle. was quite entertaining
haha nice