This doesn't seem very awesome!
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It's actually made more for my high school, but I want to see how the animation is with others.
So yeah, this, too, isn't meant to be THAT funny, if not funny-free, but I tried to make it interesting I guess. After this I won't have much time with nearly anything because, yeah. School. Anyways, I don't have much to say about this, so, I hope you enjoy this!
And a certain I.I. character makes a cameo appearance in this as well!
P.S. FaceTwitPlus, I added a Lubch cameo to it. Try and see if you can find it!
TheRealNat23 responds:
Then hopefully the next episode of this series is more awesome to you.
It feels dry.
It looks good as a kid's cartoon, introducing the class to a new year and trying to give them an energetic first day, but as something to spend time watching, the video falls flat. Even how you tried to add bits of humor here and there, they didn't have as much of an effect as maybe changing the direction of the video a bit. If it's supposed to be more humorous, give it more comedic aspects, or do something to pull it more towards what you're trying to show.
The overall animation is good, the cartoon style fits well with each new character introduced. What really took away from the video, though, is the computerized voices. Even if it's just your voice over and over again in different pitches, use something else so it feels more lifelike.
3/5 Stars, just work on your direction and it'll improve on the way.
YES just what i wanted hooray for lubch, saw this on youtube a while ago, how does this work, does one of your teachers play it in school or something?
TheRealNat23 responds:
Knew that cameo was worth something. Not in real life, no, teachers don't play Lubch, and not even in the 5th Season and beyond.
Not very fond of the voices, but the animation and subject is decent.
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