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This was uploaded two days ago but i took it down because
many people couldn't understand the words so I made
subtitles. Hope you guys can now follow the story. Enjoy
An evil man wakes up at night and the wind tells him
to go into the dark cave up the mountain..
that demon was so bad ass
and im smelling a part 2 of it
VlikeVince responds:
Hey Cool!
Even after months someone watches it :)
Glad to hear
nice what the ending song that you used?
VlikeVince responds:
Me playing guitar :D
nice theme, nice art, nice mood. But I'm guessing English is not your strongest point? There were a few needful words missing, the absence of which impaired your sentence structure and brought this down from what could be all the stars, to just minus a few. I will give oyu all the stars though, don't worry! :)
Just work on your grammar, okay? and make sure you double check what words you're USING next time, and spelling and things, okay?
excellent work! Keep it up. I am a writer with asperger's and other deficits, in case you're wondering why I mispelled the yuo; i left it in on purpose so you could mybae get a general idea of what I mean. nice work!
VlikeVince responds:
Thx mate
Yes your right
im actually half german and half norweigan :)
It was a trap all along!!!
