really liked it :D ... just try to avoid the whole "holding your nose when talking voice" its a really bad voice when it comes to voice acting
This is my very first narrative based animation I have made. It was actually made 3 years ago, and i decided to post it now. This was done for a camera and sound class, so I haven't had experience scanning or coloring anything at the time. Everything on here is pencil-test.
This is all shot on an old school Ox-Berry stand.
Enjoy, and feel free to comment (plz dont be to harsh)
really liked it :D ... just try to avoid the whole "holding your nose when talking voice" its a really bad voice when it comes to voice acting
Thank you! Really appreciate the comment. It was my first stab at voice acting-never again. Never doing that phony voice again. lol.
Good art and crude but entertaining humor. I look forward to future movies.
Thank you so much for watching. Much better ones will be presented in the future.
Well, not bad... but...
I hope that's not the final product thogh..
+Funny ending
+ok storyline
-characters need serparating and line cliches occur.
- for uploading something that obiously need rework.
(Hope that wasn't too harsh for yah... :P )
At the limited time I had to present as a class final, this was the best I could muster. As i mentioned in the description, this was the first narrative I've made in many years. I agree it needs a lot of repolishing, but it was good enough to pass the class. My line of narrative, plot mechanics, editing and animation style has changed since then. But I appreciate the critique. ;)