..What just happened? Like.. Did that story even make sense..? I think maybe it needed a little more devlopment before you posted it.
I see Potential in this but you will need some voice actors a story and some music to go with the video
The voice acting was quiet, the introduction and credits song was excessively loud, the video wasn't funny, and the video made no sense. You get .5 stars for effort.
needs a story, and maby better voise acting, and would be good with some funny background music