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What's up fellow Newground members? This is a huge project that I was working on, one that I wanted to see through all the way to the end but unfortunately I didn't see it through. Personally going over the animation over & over, I saw many mistakes, In the end I plan to start this project over & complete this time once I get to it after I finish two other projects that I'm working on. Anyway I guess that's it, please enjoy & criticism is very welcome, thank you \m/. P.S. the scene button is broken, so don't bother clicking on it, especially since the animation is short.

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I can't say its bad, there just isn't enough there to call it good. The dialog wasn't painful to read and I can defiantly see the potential of a good story. The only suggestion I can really make is regarding the memo being typed for the Hulk's scene, its not bad, but I found myself looking away several times while I was waiting for it to finish. Don't get me wrong, it is worth reading, and the typing mood is good, but at the time I just wasn't hooked enough to be hanging on every word. The only suggestion I could offer is give the viewer something else to look at other than just the words being typed, maybe?

Please don't take the low score as bad, as I said, there just wasn't enough to it for me to rate higher.

Lazarus115 responds:

I appreciate your review, a unfinished project definitely will score a low score, the restart project will be much better!

It was alittle short. but it was good. I liked it

Your code is fail central. It jumps back to beginning when you hit scene select or get to the part with army surrounding Hulk.

Hmmm, I kinda like were this is leading up too. Please finish it :)

I give 3 stars for interest, decent animation and sound. I can see this becoming something. Keep working and you could please many viewers with this.
Don't be discouraged if some move to have this blamed just because it is short. There is something good here for sure!

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Score
2.50 / 5.00

Uploaded
Aug 17, 2013
11:40 PM EDT
Genre
Action