I can't say its bad, there just isn't enough there to call it good. The dialog wasn't painful to read and I can defiantly see the potential of a good story. The only suggestion I can really make is regarding the memo being typed for the Hulk's scene, its not bad, but I found myself looking away several times while I was waiting for it to finish. Don't get me wrong, it is worth reading, and the typing mood is good, but at the time I just wasn't hooked enough to be hanging on every word. The only suggestion I could offer is give the viewer something else to look at other than just the words being typed, maybe?
Please don't take the low score as bad, as I said, there just wasn't enough to it for me to rate higher.