Very well done, plot makes sense to me, in fact it's rare to see one played out so well (in under 3 minutes). The scene with the butcher answering the door, was a nice way to work in his health problems, setting the stage for the ending, which is as solid as you can get. At first I thought the first scene of the store front, played a little long, but it was a good pace setter. Also liked the flowers in the dream sequence, was a good antithesis to the reality of the slaughter house.
Thank you very much for the great review.
It has been a while since I posted this so all I can see now are the mistakes.
Thanks for reminding me I actually spent a lot of time and effort in this animation. And everybody has to start somewhere.
I am glad you figured out the pacing and motives of everything. You have a good eye. Cheers!
It doesn't really make sense but I can tell you put a bit of work into it, so for that you get 1 and a half thumbs up.
you put a lot of work into this and i respect that, but just critisisum, we don't like to see a fat hairy old mans butt, other wise, genius
dont know what to say... but a five star and good job
brilliant! nuff said