Unrealistic tree movement.
Good idea, I guess... But the quality of it all kind of brings it down. Also, I feel the use of n***a was poorly placed. Sometimes something like that can be used effectively for comedic effect or shock value, but here it just falls flat on its face.
Keep trying, though!
Lol I appreciate the feedback, but where I come from the word n***a isn't used for shock value, in fact its a pretty every day word :P