gamegrumps...

i like your effort but this looks like it was made in ms paint

It was ok, I supposed.

Since you've now submitted the finished one, you should take the unfinished one down.

There's really not much improvement over the other one, except the addition of backgrounds. This one is watchable, and yet, the audio clip isn't all that entertaining, so it makes for a flash that's not all that interesting, at best.

Rather than trying to add more to this one, count this as experience and use it to make the next one better. :)