Dude, you did a pretty good job! The art and animation was sub par, but the music and sound of the animation added a certain atmosphere to it. And the bit with the spider was pretty surreal. Just keep on working at it, man!
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This is officially my first completely animated (and colored) animation... Yay! :)
Everything's drawn frame by frame. I had started this animation two years ago, and finally decided to finish it (I had abandoned it).
Warning: It's a bit slow at the beginning.
I was entirely inspired by the track that I found on this site. A trillion thank you to hektikmusic for creating it!
MFD responds:
Thank you very much!! :D :D :D
it was quite a nice piece being your first completed animation. a bit confused by the ending, but that's mainly because i have about 5 different theories on what happened lol.
Congratulations on completing it
MFD responds:
Thank you. xD
Awesome but I do not understand the story line what-so-ever.
The music did it's job as it kept me hooked and immersed me into this little world. The animation could use a bit of improvement, but it wasn't a deal-breaker as once again the music kept me interested. I did feel like the words or captions wasn't necessary and perhaps in the future you can utilize the full potential of the the visual aspect of the movie. But I sense a lot of potential in the direction you're taking if you choose to continue to go this route story-wise with your future flashes. Good Luck.
MFD responds:
Thank you!! :) :)
I will take your advices into consideration, I'm still new to the world of animation. :D