i love the dialogue of the female wizard xD
Three wizards embark on their greatest adventure yet.
I've been working on this animation for a while, due to a new style and such, so hope you enjoy!
i love the dialogue of the female wizard xD
Good stuff, seems the other guys watch to much Gamegrumps to have much of an opinion.
Animation, 4
Comedy, 3
Length, 3
Voice acting, a cringe worthy 2
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Total average: 3 Stars
Anything that's worth doing, is worth doing right, and your length is not right at all.
Many new animators make the mistake of wanting to "put something out there" as quickly as possible, so they rush to finish their projects, and we get things like this very short animation.
I don't know how long it actually was(I didn't count) but it felt to be around 30 seconds.
Now, I'm not saying all animation NEED to be long to be good, but I'm saying that in your particular case, a lengthier animation was necessary.
There was no exposition, no plot, no resolution, no climax, and no punchline.
The only characters that seemed likable in this case, where the seals.
If you plan on making more of these, here's a couple goals you can work towards.
2-4 Minute animation. This will give you enough time to provide an actual story, and an actual climax/punchline.
Find, and colab with, another voice actor. I'm not saying the voice acting here was particularly bad, but both wizards sound the same, that's a big no-no. You could at-least try to use a difference voice register for each one.
Your animation is fluid, and your art style is... well... your own. Not particularly good, but also not bad. Keep practicing.
I won't criticize your comedy, because that's a matter of personal taste. However, seals slapping men is under no circumstance, 'a good punch line'.
TL;DR: Don't rush to upload an animation within a month of starting. A good animation can take more than 6 months to make! Don't publish something, until you are absolutely SURE that it is done.
Show it to your friends and family before you finish, and listen to their opinions, and make edits accordingly.
Anyway, hope to see more of you in the future.
There's....nothing going on here. At all.
It is a good flash but it could be a bit longer.