Hey I liked it except I think that you could get a lot more out of the animation if you added voiceover instead of text. I also thought the characters looked awesome when they were in non stick figure form. You should practice on animation and see if you can make fully animated characters in a fight scene. It would just give it so much more depth. Look forward to seeing more from you, keep up the good work!!
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Mighty Guy is a stick figure Comic book created by Rhayme Spencer and Christian Bailey. Here is the animated teaser of the soon to come Mighty Guy animated series.
- I know this isn't the best thing in the world, but I'm coming to newgrounds, for critique and advice on how to improve on animation. Any word of advice at all is appreciated. As this is still the incomplete version of what's to come.
-Thanks for Watching.
Pyroman3k9 responds:
Thanks, and I'm Really working forward to all the things you suggested and then some. Thanks for watching.
Perhaps recruiting some voice actors could help this movie. Also, the changes in character design between shots sort of make things confusing.
Pyroman3k9 responds:
Thanks for the Advice, I'm actually planning on investing in a mic, and I'll will definitely fix the characters and the way they transition.