This animation is very bland. It's very boring to look at, add in some colour, also slow down the speech I couldn't understand a single word they were saying, plus there is a bit of cross-talking which made it a bit harder to understand. I suggest editing this by adding colour, and repairing the dialogue/voice acting so we, the audience, can actually understand it.
If I were to go a bit on and re-shape this entire thing, I would also suggest making it longer and actually have a plot for it, or some background on this to actually make sense.