M&L: Innocence Lost

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An educated Goomba dies, and Mario learns a new word in the process.


This animation is very bland. It's very boring to look at, add in some colour, also slow down the speech I couldn't understand a single word they were saying, plus there is a bit of cross-talking which made it a bit harder to understand. I suggest editing this by adding colour, and repairing the dialogue/voice acting so we, the audience, can actually understand it.

If I were to go a bit on and re-shape this entire thing, I would also suggest making it longer and actually have a plot for it, or some background on this to actually make sense.

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Bewareweegee responds:

Yeah, I'm really new to animating. The reason there's no color is because I couldn't figure out the fill tool. I'm used to the fill tool in ms paint.

Looks like you kinda know how to animate, get some actual audio production software and learn to draw from lots of videos online before you submit anything else because this is gonna get blammed and is utterly a waste of your time, but keep at it

Bewareweegee responds:

See, that's an actual review. Why couldn't have you put something like this on my other animation, instead of just insulting me?

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1.79 / 5.00

Aug 5, 2013
10:35 PM EDT
Comedy - Original