Animation was pretty good, but the plot, conflict, and resolution need work. Also, you lost points for the fried viking.
Author Comments
My first animation... It took me 6 hours to make this.......
EDIT: Thank you everyone for your feedback! :) It's much appreciated and will help me to create better animations in the future
The only joke that was mildly funny was the "Richard" thing. The rest was just random for the sake of being random. And that isn't funny
Not very original but... hey! it's not a bad start, good luck
it was indeed random good lad! but it is too short for my liking... it has legendary skills in animations! well... not yet i suppose... but it could be my good lad!
This was truly random. Whatever you smoked to create this, I want it. - The animations have been good and your voice was easy to hear and understand. + you picked a nice credit song tbh.
