there was little movement, i couldnt really get what was going on until later in the animation. However. this is your first animation. this is your base line, so expand on it by having smother movements, maybe bumping up your frame rate. try some more frame by frame animation and overall; PRACTICE and do what you like doing ;)

Not too bad. My biggest complaint is the sudden change in volume. I jumped my speakers from full blast to mute immediately after straining to hear the voice. Other then that, you're on the right track.

Hmm, not bad. you have potential. Keep at it :)

Amazing stuff!
Maybe you can sync the audio with the voice.
Amazing animation for your first time.
Keep up the good work.

just keep at it... you'll get better...