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This is a decent introduction for your series. You set up some background information and end this at a good spot to continue the next episode. I would recommend adding some background music to this and some more interesting drawings and animations. If you aren't going to animate much, you should at least have some backgrounds more interesting than just a black background with a few colored circles.
That's a decent start.
Try to expand your work and you will become one of the elite flash artists of newgrounds.
I loved the story and the narration, but the art itself could've used work, and you need to impliment sound. I really does have the ability to become a good series, just work on it a little more. Good luck to you ^_^
3.03? That is a great score for a movie that is not that good... No sound, and hardly any movement at all. I hope in future episodes you make it better.
did i hear anything?
did i play anything?
was it stylish?
was it funny?
was it violent?
were the graphics good?
NO!!!!! learn to animate before you diss my movies!