Okay, here are my thoughts, interesting topic, Animation does need improvement, Art is fairly done considering there really is no such thing as "terriable artwork." I liked it with some improvements im sure you could get into 3-1st place or even crew picks! This Has large pontental, I do not know if you want to take it that far but if you do I will support you on the side. Hey this may some day even make it into the all time bests with the improvements I mentioned I do know that making an flash animation is difficult but with the correct style/topic any thing can really be sucessful. I wish you luck, Sincerely, updown343
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This is a short movie about a little girl who has a scay dream. I hope you enjoy.
flashmakeit responds:
Thanks for the review. I really enjoyed reading it and I love the support that is why I will try my best to produce another animation like this one that is improved hoping to get 4-1 place or even crew pick. Cheers!!!!
I just didn't feel that this submission was "newgrounds worthy". It's needs a little more effort with the art and I want to feel the fear that the girl did while having the nightmare.
flashmakeit responds:
It should improve because I am going to make this into a series.
scary....and funny. ha..ha!
flashmakeit responds:
Thank you!
not that great of a video, but its not the worst. the animations were the biggest factor for my rating.
flashmakeit responds:
Jesus Christ that is not a good comment.
good movie, even if short, and very well-presented.
i esp. liked the designs on the caveman who scared the girl, and the minotaur who attacked the caveman.
what's the story here? will this become a series?
if so, it's p. odd, and interesting.
anyways, keep it up, you did good, sir!
flashmakeit responds:
Thank you. I should make this a series called dreams of mythological beast where a little girl has a hard time falling to sleep because she keep dreaming of beasts.