Well I must say this is not bad. for a first timer this is really good. my best advice would be a lil bit smoother movement and lip syncing. but all in all i liked this. mostly because this is a first timer and its done so well. :) keep up the good work
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The description said I could take the audio, so I did.
Now there is this, have fun!
Also my very first animation EVER, with nearly any directions either, so. WHOOPS!
Luna Belongs to Star2Behold: http://www.youtube.com/user/star2behold
He has some pretty neat stuff.
Wattcher belongs to me.
Rukua responds:
Actually if you would like to see improvement. I can put three link right now.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kZeKUxU9h-s
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GBatmmX6FQU
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lpWNe2TQ7_Q
Did these a few days after I did this one.
for your very first animation you did a great job and hope you do will and I will follow your work have a great day.
Rukua responds:
Thanks, I just jot a tablet yesterday, I can't believe how much easier it is to draw.
This animation was done with the mouse, that's why it repeats a lot, also I didn't know how to add a replay button.. Or stop the animation.
I should have a new animation out after a while, It's just I am leaving for West Edmonton Mall, family was like "**** We are going, and we are going to have fun"
So I'll be gone for around 5 days, then I'll be back.
Also Glad to see some one enjoyed it, I had it on Deviant art and YouTube, No one noticed it on Dev and some other animators on YouTube were just stating things I could have done better, which all were true.