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Skype call Adventures

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Well my friend secretly recorded one of our calls like 2 years ago I needed a first project and I thought it would be a good idea even though its kinda painfully bad I'm proud of it :) I would love some feedback

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No, I have yet to see a submission with less effort than this so you were lying to Keisok when you said "Also I saw alot of animation around with way less effort put in so I thought screw it ill upload it." HereWiiGoAgain at the very least has a play button in most of his latest submissions. Even if that weren't the case that's still retarded fucking logic, not only are you just trying to use the Appeal to Common Practice fallacy to sweep away the lack of effort but you're also suggesting that 'first submission' grants you immediate immunity to critique. No it doesn't, especially when it's your only submission because you can't expect me to believe a claim that you've improved to any degree whatsoever when there are no other submissions with which we can use as a measuring stick to see how much you've improved if you even have at all.

Not only that but the submission's current status is not set in stone; there's this thing called file swapping you can use to exchange a flawed or outdated version of a SWF file out with an improved version so it's not like you can't fix any of the issues with the submission either.

With that, I'll leave you with one piece of advice; get a preloader; nobody likes a submission that autoplays and forces me to listen to it before I've decided that I wanted to hear it. It's obnoxious, stupid and fuck you for not having one.

I just have to give the question: If you think it's bad, why on earth would you upload it anyway? Wouldn't you want to make the best project you can? I'm just asking.

LunaEquinox responds:

well as it was my very first I didn't want to set the bar too high and scare myself off of it. Also I saw alot of animation around with way less effort put in so I thought screw it ill upload it.

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Jul 6, 2013
10:23 PM EDT