The one-liners.... made this so much better.
It kinda reminds me of Ren and Stimpy. Good job!
I love that cartoon! Big inspiration!
as great potential for a short series.
Little weak points: text and voice for the fat guy
Suggest to give his voice a bass boost filter and lower the tone a bit
I don't even want to know more about Killgore's past.
Great animation with awesome quality but the lines were so cliche and the puns didn't quite hit the mark that i had to rate it down. it's one of those jokes were it's so funny when you conceptualize then the final output isn't as funny as you think. you already have the animation skills and story-wise that was good but you might give some more thought on the lines to give the character distinction from other characters that use the same punch line.
Well I was shooting for corny but I guess its not really your style :/