First of all: Isn't Red.

Well, putting words on a recorded video isn't a truly flash. And is boring. No music, only words, words, words and words. You have to create inside me something that makes me say: I WANT MOAR.

Improve!

little rough and still needs work but keep at it man. everyone has to start out somewhere. interesting way of displaying red and his desires to be beyond the norm wants him to be. dont give up and i look forward to seeing more of your work.

Not very entertaining, at least add some music.

SOUND!!!! 2 STARS FOR THE EFFORT!