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short adventure

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a 50 sec tale of a guy going throught some crazy shtuff


Very Very good for your first flash movie!

good movie. if this is yoru first, it's VERY good.
also, this movie is far better than what the title ''short adventure'' and the loop would imply.
also, the drawings were fresh, fluent, and very good.
it even had great face expressions, and colours! what gives?

and an interesting tale, again despite the loop. very trippy, but coherent.
the only thing that makes me sad, is the lack of a ''play'' button, or of a preloader.
i mean, yes, make it loop, thats the point of this animation, but add a preloader too, it will improve the movie's image, so much MORE.
trust me.

anyway, all in all, it was great, and p. funny for a small movie.
oh, BTW, did you used a tablet for this one? and at what FPS did you animated?

keep animating, sir! it was GOOD.

nuclearacid responds:

20 fps , I did not use a tablet and I would like to know how to add a preloader


nuclearacid responds:

thanks for your feedback

There's some good idea but skills are definitely missing... I could have saved your animation if there was at least sounds with. Nice try though.

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is this your first not bad maybe better than mine lol

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1.42 / 5.00

Jun 25, 2013
11:16 AM EDT