it was good, but it would require some voice-acting, to match the rhymes, and maybe a catchy song.
also, did you draw the brainsnail all by yourself, or did you used a sprite?
good stuff, but also add a preloader/a play button, and dont make it loop. plus, add some catchy music into it.
keep up the good work!
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Based on the video it self, it just looks like some friends got together to try something new. I think you guys should try again on something a little harder perhaps? But i'm guessing this is one of your only videos or a part of a collection of your videos.