Jim and Rick decide to clean their house one day and discover a magical corndog named Corny. Freaked out at first the boys faint and are scared of the corndog. They soon learn that he wants to be their friend and he grants them wishes. Starts off slow but gets better towards the end. Don't be too harsh with the judging. This is the first flash movie I have made in 3 years. Watch and I hope you enjoy!
BTW Please leave reviews/critiques for me so I can make my future videos more fun and exciting.
That was a good animation. Something seemed a bit off with the way the guys eyes looked. I think it was that their pupils didnt move to what they were looking at, they kinda seemed like they were staring into nothing while they spoke. Maybe even put a top eyelid on them so they dont look so wide eyed. The artwork was great, the corndog reminds me of old ren and stimpy style art, the way the characters moved and breathed looked great. really great job man, keep em coming!
well okay vid i guess but everything happened 2 slow...
presentation of the show is nice but i got very bored after 30 sec
you kinda told the viewers what we should think about the stars but it would have been much better if you had used the time to threw a few jokes or 2 so we could make our own judgment of the stars
almost nothing happened in the vid seeing them run around doing "normal stuff" was not intertaining until the corndog arrived... which was interesting at first but i personally think the stars should have taken the opportunity to wish for having a strip club rollercoaster or something big like that..
the animation is done very nicely and i can see you have putted very much effort into the background, characters and their breathing, and the random stuff around. i could see many copy pasted stuff but that not a bad thing just make sure to make some minor unique detail and that's fixed.
just be sure of speeding things a little up... a long vid is not necessary a good vid and while your at it, throw some more ideas in they don't have to be new but only interresting like the wish for filling corndog.. i see potential here and you only need to work a little harder to go much further...
good try, good to see effort, but it lack ability to deliver a good show
that only brings you 2 stars this time but keep it up^^ i would like to see more form you
Thanks for the feed back! I can only get better.
acceptable
I liked the music choice, concept, and your style of drawing. Your animation needs a little more tuning up however and I suggest a variety of voice actors. If you ever want to work on a project, I would love to team up with you. PM or email me, good work on this though!
Thanks a ton! I will consider your advice on my next video.