If my memory serves me correctly,this is the first ghost story I've ever seen,so I must say this is an interesting place to start with.The entire feel of the animation is fitting for the story,and the reveal at the end was definitely the scariest part.This makes me wonder how many spirits stay where they lived alive and why they stay on Earth instead of moving on.I'll try to remember to ask should I ever come across one myself(gulp).

the animation was very good but the story was very unclear and the music was kinda annoying

Great animation.
But which music was used in it?
Please tell me.

I DON'T GET IT!! Although lots of your techniques were really cool, the storytelling was so poor. Was this supposed to be funny? The scream face seemed like it was supposed to be a joke but I can't tell because you didn't establish the atmosphere well enough. Sorry for ranting.

5 / 5
Although the story is a bit unclear,
it was covered by the awesome animation concept.
Nice art!
The sound effect was fantastic.
Keep it up!