I ate cheerios and vomited on my screen. It really helped improve the overall graphics and aethetics of this visual debauchery.
I'll be blunt with you the graphics were poor and a bit of an eyesore, the plot felt rushed, and a bit of the voice recording was off. Though I enjoyed the feature and the atmosphere it gave off. Work at fine tuning your talents for the next installation and you just might make it to the front page. I hope this helps you improve.