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Fatherly Advice

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A father giving some important advice to his son.

Music by Kevin MacLeod at http://incompetech.com/mu sic/royalty-free/

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True story.

There are eight things that make up a good skit.
1. Creativity [Which you had]
2. Story [It was extremely lacking, but that was probably the point]
3. Characters [It was a 30 second skit, so I don't expect much depth]
4. Animation [It was iffy. But okay.]
5. Dialog [I liked the conversation quite a bit. It made me chuckle.
6. Art [If this is your personal style, its alright, but keep working at it.]
7. Music [Reminded me of an old-timey Mickey Mouse cartoon. Loved it, but could be clearer.]
8. A twist [I felt like I knew it was going to be morbid, and I was right. Still loved it though.]

I'd of wanted a longer skit, but I thought it was cute the way you had done it. So good job, and I know I only gave you two stars, but keep working at it!

The concept was great and I think the black and white "oldschool" theme really helped. The weakest part would have to be the mouth animation where I think it could have been cleaner.

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1,331
Votes
4
Score
2.96 / 5.00

Uploaded
May 23, 2013
9:33 AM EDT