that damn puddle!
the art was good, but it was too short, so the story can't expand.
Decent enough art work. Problem being your story line was so simple, these people looked too deep and thought it was too complex, thus going straight over their heads. Good luck on future material.
i didn't really get the point of that. except for a puddle being a butthole. that's about what i got
um i dindt really get it
:P im kinda slow but i didnt get the joke..theres this puddle..he goes on a plane..and he crashes into a skate park? um :/ well neways if ur gonna make a comic make a forward/back thing and not just a forward