I loved the whole thing

whats with the over use of smoothing out your lines? It doesn't make your artwork any better you know? I am aware that you're using a mouse, but the first dozen animations I did were done with a mouse and my lines never looked like that.

Anyway, try improving on your art or some shit. The voices are way too good for this.

Interesting this is acualy a quite good short

Fairly humorous, animation could be smoother, but not bad.
However, make sure you spell check.

Reminded me of a game grumps animated for some reason, good animation especially if you're getting used to it, but still good even if you're seasoned. I'm sure the colors were deliberate but I still advise diversifying the palette for the sake of visual appeal. The V/O was nice and didn't sound like a guy with a shit mic who doesn't understand basic recording (as you so often see in the portal). You may want to spell check next time however, keep it up!