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this is a rough trailer to a series id like to create, im looking for help animating, creating backgrounds, voice acting, music, everything, this also happens to be the first animation ive ever created. i've just begone to take classes for animation and am a big fan of NG, im open to suggestions, please help =)

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You have got potential kid. If this is truly your first animation then you have a good future.

Pros
Simple Art Style
Nice Music
Like the Weirdness

Cons
No way to seek the video kinda like this http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /615173
Slow Pace
No hair animation.
Art Style needs improvement especially for houses.

gdtimez responds:

yea it took me a while to get just that much done, i was hoping to meet some background designers or something here so i could focus more on animating and story writing, music and backgrounds are definatly not my thing......yet.....thanks alot =)

Not bad for your first animation, although I would advise not to use tweening as often because it makes the animation look too unnatural and 'flat'.

gdtimez responds:

so you think i should do more frame by frame? instead of tweening? or do you have some alternative that i just dont know about? xP

I liked the concept and enjoyed the clip a lot. Keep improving.

gdtimez responds:

thank you for the feedback =]

Fantastic first animation! Simple, yet very visually appealing! Love the storyline, fantastic choice of music! I'm not a real fan of the beginning of the animation though, when he's walking, but the rest is absolutely brilliant! Can't wait to see more!

By the way, what did you use to animate this? Just wondering.

BAI BAI! STRITTY OUT! (sorry about this outro. If I don't do it, they can haz all my bacon)

Also, I'd be glad to help! PM me some time if you'd like!

gdtimez responds:

i just used flash and illustraitor, nothing to fancy, thanks for the input ^.^