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Adrellia Village #45: SE

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Adrellia Village:
Season 3, Episode 45:
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Runtime: 4:30
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4/28/13 - Adrellia strongly recognizes Drake as missing. Drake rethinks his decisions and is on his way back. The transportation portals are all broken so he uses numerous other transportation methods. The World of Destiny is gradually invaded.

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An improvement from episode 43. The animation here is much better and much smoother, but the mouth loops just make it feel really lazy. There are lots of things that you could have easily fixed, but chose not to. Anyway, I liked the writing and I hope to see the conclusion of the plague saga soon.

I feel there was a strong improvement with the lip flaps, especially with the girls. The writing has stay solid, and the backgrounds I feel are better(but maybe just because there were no sky against something against something).

But, something else troubles me; why pick to focus on Drake being missing? I feel like there could've been more mixed in plot wise, but that's just a personal opinion.

Good job.
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MistyE responds:

thanks for the review

my dear friend a strikeout for you!!!

MistyE responds:

really helpful review there buddy

What the fuck is this? This is NOT Mario Kart Porn! There's not even any fucking driving. This wasn't bad, but you sir are a penis for mislabeling this, probably with the intent to get more views. I hope you're happy, because I was all horny and found this in my search, I had to jack off to a fat guy in a crown and a bunch of Cyanide and Happiness ripoffs, at least there was a chick... or at least I hope it was a chick... My dick is sad now :c

MistyE responds:

fffff

Finally getting around to reviewing this one. I'm not sure why I held it off for so long, but whatever. I will start off by saying that while this was a step backward from the last episode, it was still better than #43; only slightly though.

Now then, writing: there wasn't too much to complain about, though nothing extremely well done either. The script was okay. Not really much more to say about that.

The animation varied. While it's the same quality as AV43, there was a bit more motion of the characters, with the exception of the last scene which just seemed extremely lazy; the characters didn't even blink! The frame by frame on Philip was good though, however his tie blowing in the wind does get annoying, some nice variety of the direction it blows would have been nice to see. When Drake is walking out of the hotel, he just stops when it fades out. This is very awkward to look at; he should have either kept walking or it should have been a hard cut instead of a fade. Although you seem to be using better transitions, so that's good, though I'm not sure if there should have been a fade in the last scene, it didn't really seem fitting. When Drake is walking in the hall, the change in the color of the wall is very noticeable, that could have easily been fixed. The best parts of the animation were probably the scene with the wizards, and the transport-o-matic scene. The transport-o-matic scene was done very well, nice a psychedelic and Drake's falling and the machine exploding was hilarious. The wizard scene was also nice and suspenseful, and even though it was obviously tweeny, it still looked really well done. Overall, the animation wasn't the best but it still had its moments.

And finally voice acting. I liked the additional voices, they were really well done and hopefully the voice actors have more roles soon. The only negative thing I can think of (other than the obvious blandness of the majority, but again that's obvious, it's not getting fixed, so there's no need to go indepth ragemode about it) is how Philip's voice was different than last time. Same voice actor, obviously, but the accent he used was different than before. I liked the voice he had before, it was different :(. Overall, the new voices were good, the others are the same as before. Some improvement, but otherwise meh.

Overall, this episode was okay, certainly better than AV43, but not as good as it could have been. Some things are done good, but some also seem rushed or lazy. The subtle suspense with the wizards was nice and is leading to something big (as if I didn't know what, heh). So it is going somewhere. Really I should be rating this lower, but I rated the other ones a bit higher as well (mostly) so if I started on this one, that might not look good, plus I'd feel like a dick. Well, I hope this was helpful, and I'm looking forward to AV46. Good luck on your future projects!

MistyE responds:

thanks for the review
and i definitely agree about scene 3 being lazy, this was a bit rushed and i'll try to improve that in the next episode

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