Well, if you don't use Flash and are not much experienced, it's a great beggining! Beautiful charachter, it's short though, but it's very good! Keep going! Also the artistic part is very simple, and that makes it beautiful! The reflection was good too!.
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So... This turned out... okay I guess. I don't think I am going to bother trying to improve this one, just learn from what I did wrong with this one and improve on the next animation I do. I had a story and all planned out for this character, but it will have to wait.
I used the open source program Pencil, to animate this, so it was a bit different than using flash. I think I may have now found an easier animator to try out.
I cannot afford flash, so why not try out the free ones?
Anyways, It is my first attempt at an animation, but for the first, I was happy with it.
(Darn sound didn't work. )
The animation was not that good, just saying it straight. But it's your first animation and for that its pretty good and I am very happy too see you finish your first animaition. If you want to be an animator and you enjoy animation keep doing it. You will get better and you WILL! succeed if you try. So keep on animating :)
tbremise responds:
Thanks. I understand know that it isn't that good... I have been studying and teaching myself more about what makes a good animation and I am finally starting to improve I think. Hopefully the next thing I submit here is a good improvement from this one. =)
Not amazing, but pretty good. I don't like the length.
tbremise responds:
Well thanks. The length of the the intro is as long as the actual short, I know. I just really wanted to finish this one, I felt I was not going anywhere with it anymore, and almost felt like stopping before finishing. Pencil makes it seem like ages to get just 10 frames done.