I see that some of my advice was taken since my last review. You've added sound effects and the humor, the small amount there, was delivered well. The artwork is still a little rough and the animation was a bit choppy, but I still see that there was some major improvement from your last work I reviewed, for that I give you props.

However, I still see room for more improvement a common theme I've seen among your work is that a lot of the voice work is done by the same guy. The voice actor is good, it's just that I feel his recording equipment isn't. A lot of the lines delivered would often sound either very tinny or too quiet, which is a shame because the lines themselves are pretty good.

I can't wait for the full film and I'd like to see where you go and how you improve from here.

3.5/5

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I like it i cant wait until part 2 and nice newgrounds portal joke XD

Actually, this was pretty good. It looked to be all frame by frame, so that's quite a feat.

I did have sound, so if anyone's having sound issues, there's sound in Internet Explorer 8, so switch over for a minute to view this one. That is, unless you ...are a ...[giggle] MAC person. OK,JK.

The sound volume was just a bit low, so once the neighbors started making noise, I had to turn it up a bit. There was a noticeable difference in the volume level between the two voices as well, but that can be adjusted in the future to make them more level.

This was pretty good, and I'm looking forward to seeing what they go do now. :)

Aaaaaaaaand there is no sound T_T

why is everyone rating this so low? the audio could use some work, but i can here it fine...maybe it doesnt work with certain flash and/or windows operators.