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FUCK NO!
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It's a try to clip for Aram Bedrosian - Phantoms music.
It was descent. not top notch, but it was interesting.
By the way, can you please give me a hyperlink or name of the song that was used for the background? The music kept me interested the whole ay through.
Animation weren't bad, but they needed some work. Great job overall
prozure responds:
check out my youtube account : /user/prozure and first person on feathure channels is Aram Bedrosian - check out his stuff, he is great bassist.
Not bad for a test.
While tests are ill suited for the portal, I have to say that you have some potential.
Graphics: There isn't much animation aside for tweens, you do have some drawing skills. I mean, you have a good grasp on proportions, anatomy, perspective, and composition. However, I suggest that you look up some books on animation such as Cartoon Animation by Preston Blair.
Music: I don't have a problem with commercial songs used in (flash) cartoons, but only if the song fits. Well, it did. However, I suggest that you scour the Audio Portal for music.
Content: It's a test, so I can't really comment on that, but you do have some direction skills.
The Good:
-Original
-Nice drawings
-Fitting music
-Decent direction
The Bad:
-Not much in terms of actual animation
-The fact that it's a test
Overall: Here's a seven, and for test animations, consider using your file dump.
prozure responds:
Thanks, for such an nice respond. It was a try for a musicclip to the music in background (Drawings are pretty much my inpressions.) phantoms instead :).
My reaction if this happens to me:Is that a ghost?*Jumps out of the fucking window or call my parents like a little pussy*